thesis statement and introduction

These my thesis statement:

Since Hank Aaron was one of the first African American Major League Baseball players, he is one of the most famous and successful baseball player of all time. His fame and success is due to the fact that he hit a career total of 805 home runs, he played baseball for 23 seasons, and racist letters and death threats did not stop him from beating Babe Ruth's home record. Despite the fact his home run record of 755 was broken, he still had the most career home runs for more than 20 years.


Introduction:

My project is on of of the greatest baseball players Hank Aaron. Even as a kid Hank Aaron loved baseball. Hank Aaron continued his love of baseballl in his Major League career. Hank Aaron was a great baseball player that broke records and still holds records. Hank Aaron delt with racism and descrimination during his basbeall career and espcially when he was trying to break Babe Ruth's home run record. He did beat Babe Ruth's home run record in 1974. Hank aaron is know known as one of the best baseball player such as Babe Ruth, Willie Mays, Ernie Banks, and other but he can not be compared to anybody with his strength and great skill.